Hello Everyone.
Hope this finds you in the best of your spirits.
I am really very new this blogging concept and is really unaware of any patterns and methods
prescribed to post a blog.
Please suggest changes in this if anyone finds it irrelevant or like, not fitting in.
I am passionate about writing poems.
So, I thought I would post some of my poems in here, so that more and more people can read it
and can suggest constructive changes to it, so that I may improve.

                                                           My first poem
                                                     

 I Saw You

I saw you yesterday

Your eyes flashed like the sun,

Your face glowed like the moon,

Your lips had the charm of a rose,

Your smile had the serenity of a mountain;

To me, you were a living dream;

I saw you yesterday,

I wish to see you tomorrow.

 I would request to suggest constructive changes to it, so that it becomes more successful.

Thank you.

From Shadow, with love.